Louie Vidmar
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March 14th, 2005 done. (a poem)

DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE DONE.

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4 Responses to “done. (a poem)”

  1. nougatmachine Says:

    It’s a good start, but the rhyme scheme is a little too simple.

  2. Louie Says:

    start? it’s done dude.

  3. Jared Says:

    shit. (a review)

    THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT! THIS IS SHIT!

  4. Louie Says:

    Well if Jared wrote it, it’s probably shit. Wheee! Burn!!